Seasons change as the pysche....c/c?

Wow! I wish some of the regulars were here, you would have many more comments. Although there were a couple bumpy spots for me only because of the way the lines were so closely linked, you shouldn't capitalize the next line --some you did, some you didn't. It's quite abstract and I am not an academic so I don't go far with critique but I really really like this. If you don't get a lot of hits you may consider re-posting when there's a bigger crowd.